A Poem to Osiris

I am currently writing poems linked to the Egyptian deities and am aiming to capture key qualities as well as events from their mythology. I am by no means a writer but wanted to share my first poem to honour Osiris (Ausir)

Osiris, son of the sky and the earth,
King of Kemet, by right of his birth.
He taught his people to harvest the land,
And brought fertility from the harsh desert sand.
Osiris taught peace and removed all upheaval,
Bringing only good and removing all evil.

But all was not good, not safe on the throne,
For Set wanted Kemet all for his own.
Locked in a box, in the Nile he drowned,
Set killed his brother, and then claimed his crown.
Isis his love, searched in marshes and sand.
For her precious husband, tears flooded the land.

With care and with love, with power and magic,
Isis brought joy from something so tragic.
The wind of her breath gave Osiris new life,
And they united again as husband and wife.
They conceived a son, a true born heir,
Upon whose head the crown he would wear.

But Osiris could not stay, to Duat he progressed,
To put the hearts of the travelling souls to the test.
A balancing feather would make make the path clear,
To an eternal life without suffering or fear.
May all hearts be judged with fairness and grace,
To find peace eternal in his sacred space.

Lord of the underworld, the guider of spirits
Judge of the heart, to whom all souls must visit.
Bringer of renewal, Foremost of the west,
Who oversees those in their eternal rest.
The triad of Abydos with Auset and Heru,
Dua Ausir, Dua Ausir,Neb Abdhu.

Blessed be

Alan

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Beautiful poem, Alan. Who says you’re not a writer?!? I take issue with them!

Not only are you a prolific writer, but you’re also a published author: here. This counts. We’re not getting paid for our wisdom and ability to share like people in Poe or Twain’s time, but readership is much more vast now. You are more well known than the greatest philosophers of previous eras were in their own lifetimes!

Keep up the good work. :revolving_hearts:

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@Cosmic_Curiosity very beautiful poem! :two_hearts:

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Me lol. I would say im pretty good at factual stuff but not so much of a creative writer e.g. poetry. Tha k you so much for your kind and inspiring words.

@AIRAM thank you. I’m glad you like it

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You did a beautiful job! I really enjoyed reading that.

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Thank you so much. I didnt realise how difficult it was to try and make things rhyme :see_no_evil: :joy:

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What a great poem! You are talented. :raised_hands:

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I love it! read it a few times and enjoyed every line.

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Im glad you enjoyed it. I hope it clearly told the story as you read it.

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But you are! You wrote this - therefore, you are a write :clap: and it is such a wonderful poem, too!

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Very beautiful poem :heart:

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You told his tale beautifully, I’m sure he will be pleased :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Hear, hear! :raised_hands:

Georgia said it beautifully, so I’m just going to echo her words - you write wonderfully, @Cosmic_Curiosity! Whether it’s exploring the facts in fun and easy-to-digest ways, or through sharing your beautiful creativity in a way that brings joy and inspires. You’re quite the writer! :partying_face: :heart:

The first few rhyming pairs tend to come pretty easily- it’s keeping the rhyme going that always has me scratching my head. And look at this! You’ve got a whopping five stanzas with three rhyming pairs a piece - that’s really impressive! Bravo! :clap: :star_struck:

Beautifully written and gorgeously drawn - these are masterpieces worthy of the divine. I agree with Celestia - I’m sure They are very happy with these beautiful works :sparkles:

Thank you so much for sharing them with us too, Alan - I really enjoyed reading! :heart: :raised_hands:

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WOW That is excellent! This is your first poem. I must tell you Alan, you are wonderful at this. I Keep up the great work.

Blessed Be,
Medea

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Hi CelestiaMoon, I agree with you 100%.

Blessed Be,
Medea

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Alan, your poem is beautiful! :heart: :hugs:

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Maybe I am not as bad at creative writing as I thought I was! Maybe I have utilised the creative and dreamy energies of pisces season to my advantage.

Thank you everyone for your kind comments

Blessed be

Alan

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That’s the spirit! :grinning: Shoo those doubts away and let your coven tell you truth - you’re an amazing creative writer, Alan! Everything you write is a gift to read - may you keep on thriving and keep on having fun with what you do! :writing_hand: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :sparkles:

Blessed be!

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Fantastic! I can’t believe that’s your first poem! :heart:

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